Corrections to the double page spread

In the answer to the first question I have made it sound like all History teachers are under the impression that history is a book based subject and I forgot the mention that Dr Bennett is only going into the schools to aid the teachers and this does not come across very well in the answer. 

The new answer to this question is;

I think that this answer is much more professional and shows that Dr Bennett is not there to do the teachers job she is just there to try and help boost enthusiasm from the students. Which was the idea we came up with as a group and the written article really needs to reflect this in the right way or it just will not work. 

As this answer is slightly longer than the other one  I have ha to change the order of the article so I decided to group the questions together. I didn't realize how disorganised the article was and this doesn't make it look professional it just makes it look awful! So I have grouped the questions according to topic and this is now how the article reads. 

I have just noticed that when you are reading this the bright red it a little bit hard to see and  I forgot that some people who are colour blind are not able to see bright red. To accommodate for this  I will change all the bright red writing to a darker red that way it will be easier for people to read and it is remaining within the Manx colour scheme. 

So after adjusting the article answers, rearranging the article and changing the colour of the text I think that  I have created an article that I am happy with. It looks professional and resembles articles that have been published in the BBC History Magazine. 

As a group we found some issues with the double page spread. The context of the article needed to be changed slightly as certain parts once read through did make history teachers as a whole group sound bad. The plan is to re write certain parts of the article slightly so that the sound more specific and don't offend history teachers as that is not the aim.