The final three pages of my paper

                              

These were orginally the final three pages of my paper, however while I was doing my evaluation I noticed that there was some small tidying up issues and one spelling mistake so I have changed them slightly.

Front Page

I made sure that there was the margin around the whole of the front cover and made sure it was as even as possible. I also changed the font size on the cover story as when i printed it of I realised that it was a little bit to big. I have also changed the position of the date and added a price, which is quite important. 

Second page

On this page I changed the layout slightly so that the margin was slightly bigger and it was equal all around the page. I also introduced a box around the 'JAR' advert because I wanted to include a phone number as an advert without one is a little bit pointless. I also made the picture of 'Elliot' a little bit smaller. 

Third page. 

On  this page I changed the margin line so that it was all the way round the page and I also changed the layout slightly with the 'To young to drive' story. I thought that when I looked at the story that it was  a huge block of text for a paper, especcially one that gives summary news. So I decided that a better layout for the story would be collums as it breaks it up and it does not look as much. I also decided to change were I put the image as one image directly under another did not look right and the page looked uneven so I decided to put the image at the other end to allow it to look better.