I have moved the papers logo to the correct third on the paper, the top left hand side and I have made it a little bit longer. There is still the possibility that I will add a small price tag somewhere on this logo but as for now I have not decided were to put the price, but this can be added at a later date. I have also added my advert for 'The Engine Room' Night club next to it. I underestimated the size of this advert as originally I planned to include 2 or maybe 3. However now the advert is there I have realised that they will not all fit. I have an idea of putting the advert for the papers 'App' and 'internet page' lower down the front page like it was on the Lancaster Evening Post. I have also added my headline which reads 'MHK'S ARE STILL DEBATING UNIVERSITY TUITION FEES!' the plan is to include part of the article on the second page and include a picture of some college students, after I have asked some of the students in my other classes for there permission to take there picture.

I have put the headline next to the image and it reads;
ELLIOT, FILLS THE ENGINE ROOM.
ANOTHER RISING MANX STAR.
This is an eye catching headline, although I may change it in the future for now I am happy with
This is the small summary of the story that is under the headline, I have tried to incorporate all of the key points about this gig into this and I am confident that it reads easily and provokes interest into reading the rest of the story on page 4.
'Elliot stormed The Engine Room on Friday night, the young rising star had a line of fans coming out of the club and lining up down the harbor to listen. The 19 year old has risen to recent fame, read more on page 4.
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